Love the pieces individually and saw them together in my mind. I was disappointed, however, in how you grouped them in the “studio view”. The rhythm and structure wasn’t apparent when combined. I feel as though you should break them up into a series of “studio views”, maybe five, and concentrate more in having them coordinate with each other.
Hey, I know, who the hell am I…..yada. It was a thought, I am used to sharing them. Discard if you feel it is offensive or off the mark. BUT, I am very good at this and feel your work is so very strong that it should be lost in a traffic jam.
Jamie said,
May 12, 2009 at 7:41 pm
Love the pieces individually and saw them together in my mind. I was disappointed, however, in how you grouped them in the “studio view”. The rhythm and structure wasn’t apparent when combined. I feel as though you should break them up into a series of “studio views”, maybe five, and concentrate more in having them coordinate with each other.
Hey, I know, who the hell am I…..yada. It was a thought, I am used to sharing them. Discard if you feel it is offensive or off the mark. BUT, I am very good at this and feel your work is so very strong that it should be lost in a traffic jam.
Jamie
Jamie said,
May 12, 2009 at 7:42 pm
should NOT be lost in traffic